Final
Posted by danielnhs11 on May 22, 2009
Daniel Nerviani
Mrs. Pomerantz
English 2 Block 1
22 May 2009
The Future is in Our Hands: Live Sustainably
The documentary film, The Future is in Our Hands: Live Sustainably, was very informative. The purpose of the film was to inform, persuade and effect change, and it did just that. With all of the creative metaphors, statistics, and pictures, the film was able to effectively bring attention to the crisis we are in today. Some metaphors, like Jeff and Joey’s ball metaphor, informed me of many things going on in today’s world. It helped set the stage for some of the effect changes they had in their section, which I thought was very smart. Also, in the beginning of Jake, Julia, and Janelle’s section, Julie did a narration that informed me of many things wrong with our lifestyle. Wasting items and other things were brought to attention. After the documentary was over, I’m sure many people felt they had learned many things. Next is the persuasive part. Brad and Marquis’s M&M metaphor brought attention to the fact that people need to think of others in order to improve the environment. In addition to that, my group’s metaphor of blowing up the Earth, then playing it in reverse to show what we could do if we change. It provided the audience with the scare off what also could happen to the Earth if we do not change. Finally, the last purpose of this film was to effect change. I think that the informing stage and the persuading change together provided the audience with a desire to effect change. Again, Brad and Marquis’s M&M metaphor showed that some simple things as sharing can go a long way. Someone, like Brad, who is given something for almost no reason at all, might be inclined to do something nice for someone else. This someone else might also happen to be the environment. In short, this film was able to make a difference.
This film had many great qualities, but I thought that the music was the best part. It added a fun, lively experience for everybody watching it. It also helped add to the narrations, pictures, statistics, and even some interviews. The nice, upbeat tempo that Joey incorporated into his film made it enjoyable to watch. The music in my group’s section also added to some visual metaphors. At the end, where we had the Earth blowing up and then playing in reverse, we added a sad sounding tone. It was a tone that marks the end of something with a good climactic end. It was almost like you were a kid again watching cartoons where you knew something bad was going to happen. Another thing that adds to music being great was the lack of music in some parts. In Frannie, Amanda, Sarah, and Jaylah’s group, there was not any music present in the section. This made it a little bit uninteresting to the audience. I think if they had spiced it up a bit with some music, it would have been more pleasant to watch. Along with the music, the visual metaphors that we filmed worked great. Like I said before, the metaphor with the M&M’s was perfect. It was a great mixture of emotions, with sadness, togetherness, and joyfulness. It added a great beginning to their segment. The next great thing I think we had in the film was our narrations. Beside the blip we had in the first group’s segment, the narrations were very thought out and clear. They provided an extra element to the video besides just watching. They also helped with informing and persuading the audience to effect change. Even though some could get a bit lengthy, I think that they served a great purpose.
Even though we had many great things in our documentary film, I think we had a couple of bad mess ups. In the first segment, we had a malfunction with the narration. It started a bit too late, and ended up going into one of the interviews. It was clearly noticeable, and was a bit embarrassing. Furthermore, the narration was supposed to be of a slide with text. The text was very long and had a very thin font, so it was tricky to read. I ended up not being able to read it, or listen to it, so the slide was a waste. After that though, I think the film went great and we made up for our mistakes.
Working on this film taught me a number of things, but I think the most important part I got out of it was to always be prepared. My group ended up having to stay after school and to even come before school one time because we weren’t close to finishing before the deadline. If we had prepared a bit better, and maybe learned how to use some of the features in the Adobe Premiere Elements a little bit earlier, we could have finished in time. Along with being prepared, I learned many small things about blogging and filming. I had read numerous blogs over the years because I happen to love sports, and ESPN.com has many blogs. I always thought that it was just kind of like, “Hey I’m thinking about this, so I’ll go write about it for a few minutes,” but it turned out to be a lot more work than that. Even though we were just summarizing and taking notes, it still took a good amount of thought to write about it. Then you have to worry about grammar and spelling and all sorts of little things. It was almost like writing a mini essay. On the other hand, it was still kind of fun. When we were researching to narrow our subject down to one topic, I had fun going around reading about things I wanted to write about. After we picked our topic though, it became a bit tedious and boring. Since we needed interviews for our documentary, we had to learn about filming. This proved a bit harder than I first thought. Some things that you have to consider are camera angles, lighting, volume, placement, etc. I never thought there would be so many small things that you would have to think about. Still, they were easy to pick up on and eventually filming became quite easy. The last thing I learned from working on this film was about my partners. Some of them were very productive (Curtis and Amer), but some of them not (Joe D). I don’t want to be mean, but sometimes I felt like we were better off without Joe because he made no effort. He even hurt us more than he helped us sometimes.
In the future, I’m not sure if I will use much of this stuff because I don’t think I’ll be making another documentary film. I won’t need the filming information, but I guess I might need the blogging info sometime in the future. In a nutshell, this film was informative and could help the world, but I don’t think it will make much of a difference because people (including me) are stubborn and do not like to change.
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